March 16, 2016 – Writer's Treasure Chest

As with most things nowadays, there are even “user manuals” for kissing scenes available online.

I have been reading through quite some of them and created a list that seems to work for me:

Where does the kissing take place?
What is the occasion?
What can I do to increase the tension?
Description of the body reaction
End of the kiss

Let me explain my list a little more detailed:

Where?

– Describe the scenery

– Are they at an event?

– Are they surrounded by others?

– Are they alone?

– What is around them?

– A park?

– A romantic pavilion?

– A living room, a kitchen, an elevator?

Occasion?

– How many times have they met before?

– Is it happening on a date?

– If yes, is it the second date? The third one?

– Do they know each other well, or are they just about to get closer?

– Is it a kiss at an anniversary?

Increase the tension?

– Describe how they get closer

– Describe the closing of the distance

– Is either one of them closing the distance on their accord?

– Add some tension and ‘electricity’ to the scene

Describe how their bodies react?

– Talk about how they touch each other

– Describe how their skin reacts

– Tell the reader how they smell and taste

– Give details how they see each other

– Do they close their eyes?

– What do they hear?

– How do their lips feel?

– Do their tongues play with each other?

End of the kiss

– How do they separate?

– Do they regret the kiss is over?

– What did the kiss with their feelings and emotions?

– How are they getting a certain distance between them again?

Now, let’s see what we can do with this list and create a kiss-scene without boring the reader to death:

Annabelle was surprised to see Rick had taken her to an open-air concert of her favorite band. She had longed to see this band playing, but she never felt a rock concert being the epitome of a romantic date. Even more, she was taken aback to realize he had bought tickets directly at the stage. The hustle in the front rows would be enormous. The beaming and sparkling of his eyes kept her away from protesting. He seemed happy to have surprised her. The crowd around them surrounded them with noise and heat. Even though she only wore a t-shirt and a thin jacket, there was no chance she could get cold. Rick held her hand to avoid losing her. The concert was epic, and Annabelle’s hand was always held by Rick’s he held her by his side until the band played one of their rare ballads. Surrounded by fans who were jumping and applauding Annabelle felt her face suddenly pressed against Rick’s muscular chest. She took a deep breath. He smelled like honey and chocolate. She had taken a few secret whiffs before and had already thought, if the perfume industry would wish to increase their turnovers, they should have bottled Rick’s smell.

His shirt felt soft on her face, and she couldn’t resist rubbing her cheek on his strong chest, only a little bit. There was a lot of movement around them; eventually, he wouldn’t realize what she did. “What are you doing, Sweetie?” His dark voice murmured into her ear.

It sent a sweet shudder down her spine, and she lifted her face to look at him. His right hand on her hip pulled her closer while his left hand supported her neck and jaw line.

Her entire body length was pressed against his strong frame; her breasts felt nearly flattened. But she did not move, did not want to move. His hot skin nearly burned her own. Her arms and hands found their way underneath his jacket, grabbing fists full of fabric while her entire body screamed in the desire to get even closer.

Rick’s ice blue eyes held her gaze, and he lowered his face to hers.

For only the fraction of a second, his mouth brushed her lower lip, like the touch of butterfly wings. In a sigh Annabelle uttered the almost inaudible sound of a kitten, desperately wanting more. The next touch on her lip was the tender caress of his tongue. Annabelle’s soft lips parted and she let Rick’s demanding tongue touching her own, searching her limits playfully, but she did not feel like limiting him. She let herself sink deeper into this kiss and allowed her tongue to dance vividly with Ricks.

All music, noise, the people around them, disappeared in a whirl, it seemed they were alone in this place. Nothing was important than to taste the sweetness of Ricks lips and tongue. She did not realize the ballad had ended, and they both were displayed on the grand monitor onstage.

Only when the clapping and applauding got more regular and grew whooping, her consciousness focused again onto the present, and she realized where she was. She felt Ricks smile on her lips, and she buried her embarrassed pink face in his shirt.

There was no room to separate her body from his, and Rick wouldn’t have permitted it. He held her close in his arms, and she felt more than she heard his laughter.

Of course, this is only a try to describe a Kiss scenery “out of nowhere”. It might even be far from being perfect. After all, we haven’t read all about Annabelle and Rick’s relationship. But I think we might have gotten at least an idea of how far this relationship has already developed.

It was fun to introduce you to Annabelle and Rick. If you have an idea on how to pattern this kiss differently, I’d love to read it in the comments.

Or: do you have your list of how to build a kissing scene? It would be interesting to see it.